Ep. 4: Tomoya and Utaha collaborate to fix the game script flaws in Two Nights Three Days

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Tomoya identifies a critical weakness in Utaha’s writing, noting that while the text functions well as a novel, it fails as a game script. Acting in his capacity as director, he determines that the material requires significant revision. Utaha eventually regains her composure and joins him in the effort to improve the narrative structure. Together, the pair works diligently to adapt the story, aiming to transform the literary quality into a functional and engaging format suitable for the game medium they are developing.